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2016-11-11 07:09
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摘要：
為什么*學(xué)生在雅思寫(xiě)作上總是丟分？
和英語(yǔ)國(guó)家的學(xué)生相比，*學(xué)生總是會(huì)在雅思寫(xiě)作上犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
一、句子隨意添加
一般烤鴨們寫(xiě)完了一句話(huà)之后發(fā)現(xiàn)好像少些了寫(xiě)什么，要加上去，然后就出現(xiàn)這樣的句子。
There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.
其實(shí)很好改，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用，news后面加了點(diǎn)，就是句子的結(jié)束了，然后For還大寫(xiě)，這樣后面就徹底成一個(gè)句子啦。
改為：There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, andnewspaper.
二、各種前后不一致
說(shuō)話(huà)肯定前面說(shuō)完了后面得跟上吧！比如：When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
one是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，而且have應(yīng)改為has；want應(yīng)改為wants, 典型的主謂不一致，要改寫(xiě)的沒(méi)改寫(xiě)。
改為：When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
三、中式思維要人命
中式化。比如：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本兩個(gè)句子很正常，但用中式思維把兩個(gè)句子一連起來(lái)感覺(jué)就不對(duì)了。
改為：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
四、指代不清
比如：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
這個(gè)句子相當(dāng)于“我是誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)”。*看到就蒙圈了......
改為：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
五、詞性用錯(cuò)
這個(gè)還要解釋么，大家應(yīng)該經(jīng)常犯錯(cuò)吧。介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等。
None can negative the importance of money. negative是什么詞性呀，用到這里了，應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞：否定，deny!
六、用詞不當(dāng)
比如：The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
顯然，把obstacles“障礙”，“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use(不斷增加的使用)”應(yīng)改為“abusive use(濫用)”。
七、修飾詞錯(cuò)位
英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)不同，放錯(cuò)一個(gè)位置，句子的意思就會(huì)完全發(fā)生變化啦!會(huì)造成了不必要的誤解。
比如：He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.
分析：better位置不對(duì)，應(yīng)該是 he will know the world outside the world better，放到*后。
以上就是雅思寫(xiě)作中常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法丟分處，同學(xué)們要注意避免這些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤哦！
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一、句子隨意添加
一般烤鴨們寫(xiě)完了一句話(huà)之后發(fā)現(xiàn)好像少些了寫(xiě)什么，要加上去，然后就出現(xiàn)這樣的句子。
There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.
其實(shí)很好改，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用，news后面加了點(diǎn)，就是句子的結(jié)束了，然后For還大寫(xiě)，這樣后面就徹底成一個(gè)句子啦。
改為：There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, andnewspaper.
二、各種前后不一致
說(shuō)話(huà)肯定前面說(shuō)完了后面得跟上吧！比如：When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
one是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，而且have應(yīng)改為has；want應(yīng)改為wants, 典型的主謂不一致，要改寫(xiě)的沒(méi)改寫(xiě)。
改為：When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
三、中式思維要人命
中式化。比如：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本兩個(gè)句子很正常，但用中式思維把兩個(gè)句子一連起來(lái)感覺(jué)就不對(duì)了。
改為：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
四、指代不清
比如：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
這個(gè)句子相當(dāng)于“我是誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)”。*看到就蒙圈了......
改為：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
五、詞性用錯(cuò)
這個(gè)還要解釋么，大家應(yīng)該經(jīng)常犯錯(cuò)吧。介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等。
None can negative the importance of money. negative是什么詞性呀，用到這里了，應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞：否定，deny!
六、用詞不當(dāng)
比如：The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
顯然，把obstacles“障礙”，“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use(不斷增加的使用)”應(yīng)改為“abusive use(濫用)”。
七、修飾詞錯(cuò)位
英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)不同，放錯(cuò)一個(gè)位置，句子的意思就會(huì)完全發(fā)生變化啦!會(huì)造成了不必要的誤解。
比如：He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.
分析：better位置不對(duì)，應(yīng)該是 he will know the world outside the world better，放到*后。
以上就是雅思寫(xiě)作中常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法丟分處，同學(xué)們要注意避免這些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤哦！
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